The Ridge

I could hear the waves bashing against the rough rocks. I could hear the rocks crushing under the the bike wheels. I could smell salt water the water smelt like salt. I could feel the warm breeze. I saw a large mountain and rode up it with a hundred percent confidence that i could make it up. So when i made it up i saw a big fall straight ahead so with my confidence i tried going down but with a thump i just made it. I am now going to push with all my strength to make it over the fence i have done this before so i need to be perfectly in front of the fence and lean on one wheel and hope i make it over. I made it to the beach the sun shining on the water making it clear the beach was as beautiful as the hot shining sun.  we are learning to to make our writing interesting as possible by adding what we hear, feel, see and taste